Score: 7

"Nice..."

submission: I'm Not Driving Anymore

date: March 16, 2006

A very stylish little piece... I like it. I guess some people can't handle not having a plot, but it's well done... How many pictures were involved? and have you considered the posibility of doing one where you end up where yous tarted, so it loops? Just an idea...

Anyway... well done...

Score: 7

"Very well done, sir"

submission: Toothpaste

date: March 12, 2006

I must say, this is a MASSIVE improvement in your animation skills as opposed to some of the other ones that i've seen from you. Great work on that front.

My main criticisim, of course, would be the vocals. the volume of some of the voices was nearly impossible to hear at times, and there's the "ffft" sound from people accidentally blowing into the mic.

My advice is to just keep working on the sound, and then she'll be sweet.

cheers for the laugh, mate.

Score: 3

"It's been done..."

submission: The newgrounds system

date: May 29, 2005

This movie has been done many many times (and oftem much better) by many other people. In faact, much of it looked very similar to another particular one which I remember... Hmmm...

Score: 9

"Aww... bunny so cute... AARGH MY FACE!!"

submission: Bunnykill 3 Vol.1

date: May 20, 2005

Yep.. it's great.. kinda like madnes... except with bunnies... and light sabers... odd, that... Great work, though... And what's with all those doors jamming at critical moments? heh heh heh.

Ok, I did enjoy this. Can't wait for the next chapter, but you can probably understand when I say that the story line wasn't terribly original. You can probably do better... I dunno... you're the artist and I'm just a pleb.

Good work. keep it up.

Score: 7

"damned odd... but great..."

submission: Boy Machine

date: March 19, 2005

This looks like what I would imagine the dream of a down syndrome child to be like if he had a sheet of acid and climbed into a washing machine. good work.

on a more constructive side, I think you need to boost the voices just a little.

Score: 7

"heh it was great"

submission: Taking Retards to the Zoo

date: March 11, 2005

and where did i find the link to this? surprise surprise, from the official dead milkmen page... but i guess taht you already know that, don't you...

it was a great hommage to the song, and the band.

Score: 2

"Noice..."

submission: Petals Around The Rose

date: February 27, 2005

It's interesting... and kinda pretty... I think that you are partly limiting the ability of people to get it by not teling them that the name of the game is important...

Score: 6

"OMFG! Mario! without sprites!"

submission: Marios Mushrooms

date: February 23, 2005

I liked it mainly for that fact. I am entirely sick of sprite movies and bad tweening. it was amusing (albeit short)... keep it up.

Score: 4

"Nothing terribly new there"

submission: Jump the Gap

date: February 20, 2005

It's just the same kind of thing that's been done by too many people for too long. The graphics were ok, but you lose points for stick men. although you DO gain a fair few points in sound for Misfits. You're animation makes it look like you could do alot better than this. try something else.

Score: 4

"Eye Spy something that looks like..."

submission: Gov. Assassin - Episode 2

date: February 17, 2005

This looks like a cross between "I Love Egg", "Madness", and paintball skirmish. Apart from just watching people kill each other alot (or paint each other blue) there isn't really much to it. The story line is unclear if existant, the blood is blue (although they DO look like eggs, so i might just let that one pass), and there are a few other things which i won't bother listing.

I'm not saying tha this is bad flash, just it needs more work, and planning.